HILFE - Motivationsschreiben ESB Reutlingen (Englisch, Beispiel)
Hey ich möchte mich bei der ESB dieses Jahr bewerben und habe dafür mal ein Motivationsschreiben mal geschrieben. Könnt ihr da mal drüber schauen und mir Fehler oder Verbesserungen nennen? Danke für eure Hilfe!
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This essay is supposed to consider the question of ?Why do I want to study International Business and how can it help me to pursue my career goals??.
Even though there are probably hundreds of meaningful reasons to engage in this course of study, here is my personal argumentation for studying International Business at your highly reputed university.
It might sound weird, but everything started with my interest in Apple Inc. . Since my encountering with products from Apple and their way of selling them, I got very curious about how the process works. I was fascinated by developing something truly amazing and commercializing it, so that millions of people around the world will end up with the desire to possess it. That way I started to get interested in economic interrelationships, marketing and also business studies.
I grew up in a relatively small city in Baden-Württemberg, but I always had the desire to get to know the world and especially foreign cultures. Therefore I decided to spent time abroad to follow my curiosity, after I would have finished my Abitur. Subsequent to my successful graduation from the XXX in XXX, which I left as one of the best students of my year, I went to Santa Barbara for nine months. Not only did I improve my English considerably and discovered new sides of myself, I also encountered highly interesting people and cultures. The time in California encouraged me to be even more passionate and determined about a global and multicultural career for my future.
This leads me now to my striven career goals, which I hope to achieve after receiving a high-quality degree of your university. My career aspirations are based on two simple facts. First of all I would like to work in a global company, where I have the possibility to change something for the better. I know that it is really ambitious to say ?I want to change the world!?, but that is kind of what I have in mind. Even though I might change something small, I would have reached this goal of mine.
Secondly it is important for me to be convinced of what I do and to have faith in it.
International Business fulfills both of those requests for me in a special way. Insofar as it is a field of employment where faith, determination, creativity and competitiveness can lead up to positive impact and change for thousands of people.
This argument especially stresses my intention of studying International Business, it includes things I truly enjoy like competition, diversity, creativity with an international focus.
The ESB Reutlingen shows exactly those characteristics which I was looking for in a course of studies, as well as in a university. Studying with highly motivated people in an innovative and creative environment distinguishes the difference between your university and others.
I would feel extremely honored if I would get the chance to achieve my goals with your help. Furthermore I believe that also the ESB Reutlingen would profit from my ambitious and passionate attitude towards this field of study.
Yours sincerely,
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